View Full Version : My Website
smartali89
12-29-2007, 11:33 AM
Hi Guys...
Look at my site, and give me your views about it:
http://planetmaks.webng.com
btarunr
12-29-2007, 11:44 AM
Nice, sharpen the English a little bit. Overall it's really nice.
smartali89
12-29-2007, 11:49 AM
I don't understand what you mean by sharpen?
btarunr
12-29-2007, 11:50 AM
Grammar, sentence construction.
smartali89
12-29-2007, 11:51 AM
ok, thanks
btarunr
12-29-2007, 11:52 AM
Do you do the writing yourself?
smartali89
12-29-2007, 12:59 PM
somewhat
btarunr
12-29-2007, 01:01 PM
First thing to learn: Software= singular ; Software= plural
Softwares = wrong.
smartali89
12-29-2007, 02:07 PM
Thanks... anything else?
Corrosion
12-29-2007, 06:25 PM
i like it. keep up the good work.
vBulletin® v3.7.0, Copyright ©2000-2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.