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smartali89
12-29-2007, 11:33 AM
Hi Guys...

Look at my site, and give me your views about it:

http://planetmaks.webng.com

btarunr
12-29-2007, 11:44 AM
Nice, sharpen the English a little bit. Overall it's really nice.

smartali89
12-29-2007, 11:49 AM
I don't understand what you mean by sharpen?

btarunr
12-29-2007, 11:50 AM
Grammar, sentence construction.

smartali89
12-29-2007, 11:51 AM
ok, thanks

btarunr
12-29-2007, 11:52 AM
Do you do the writing yourself?

smartali89
12-29-2007, 12:59 PM
somewhat

btarunr
12-29-2007, 01:01 PM
First thing to learn: Software= singular ; Software= plural

Softwares = wrong.

smartali89
12-29-2007, 02:07 PM
Thanks... anything else?

Corrosion
12-29-2007, 06:25 PM
i like it. keep up the good work.